Tuesday, December 1, 2015

Blood Drive Critique

EVAN:

Positive- The voiceover sounds good; not monotoned
Negative- some of the sound levels aren't even and the video didn't end in a quote

NICK:

Positive- The L&J edits are really good
Negative- You cant hear the voiceovers much at all

ALLYSON:

Positive- Rule of thirds is followed
Negative- needs nat noise behind voiceovers

COURTNEY:

Positive- The camera is really steady
Negative- Try to get more interesting B-Roll

DEMA: 

Positive- Rule of thirds is followed
Negative- The sound levels need to be more even

ROSIE:

Positive- The opening voiceover is good with the statistic
Negative- The camera is shaky

KIRSTEN:

Positive- The rule of thirds is followed
Negative- The volume levels need to be more even

RYLEE: 

Positive- The L&J edits are good
Negative- There is a little bit of a gap between each interview and voiceover

CATHERINE: 

Positive- Rule of thirds is good
Negative- Voiceovers are too monotoned

ALEX:

Positive- Voiceovers are good
Negative- Not many interviews

MITCH:

Positive- You were good at getting the interviewees to give long answers
Negative- The volume levels need to be more even

NICOLE:

Positive- The L&J edits are good
Negative- Rule of thirds needs to be followed more in the first interview

DREW:

Positive- Interviews are good
Negative- Needs nat noise behind the voiceovers

EMILY:

Positive- L&J edits are good
Negative- Volume levels need to be more even

CONLIN: 

Positive- Needs more than one interview
Negative- Needs longer voiceovers

CYLE:

Positive- L&J edits are good
Negative- make sure interviews don't overlap voiceovers

JACOB:

Positive- Camera is steady
Negative- VO's need to be less monotoned

ABBEY: 

Positive- Opening VO is good and informative
Negative- Seemed really short

AMY: 

Positive- I like the opening VO
Negative- Volume levels could be louder

CHELSEY:

Positive- L&J edits are good
Negative- On Sophia's interview, cut out where she is just sitting at the beginning

ALYSSA:

Positive- The interviews are good and have lots of words
Negative- All volume levels need to be even



As a group, most of our videos are pretty good. We could all use some work on the L&J edits and making all the sound levels even. I know I personally need to recheck all my sound levels and make my L&J edits more obvious. But other than that I think our class as a whole did pretty good

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